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We are going to have to Pre-prepare some of our costumes especially the white dresses. We will have to buy at least 8 white dresses. And drip some fake blood on them in advance so that it doesn't look fresh on shoot day. Lottie is going to a vintage sale at the weekend. We all hope Lottie can find some dresses, Meanwhile, Alfie and I will try and make a battery for the LED eyes I recently purchased.

We were recommended to film the last shot of the satanic creature with 3 different storylines which is an idea that we were thinking of already. One where we see the eyes of the creature and suggestive death of the girl, another one Is where we see more than just the eyes of the creature and see an outline of its body. The last one is where the creature moves really quickly towards the Camera or away and we have a shot of the ritualist walking out of the room and we hear screaming.