Unfortunately, the idea doesn't make two minutes. However, there is a few more shots of a satanic creature that we will use in the actual thing and maybe get some test footage in the coming weeks of experimentations with the 'Eyes' that are the main part of the sequence that have to be scary for audience members.
The pace of the sequence is generally quite steady and consistent. The only time when the pace of the sequence slows down slightly is when the ritualist is laying down his objects. However, this is good because the audience can see what he is laying out and justify at whether they have any meaning towards the ritual. This is also towards the end of the sequence, on the day of filming and with editing we will use fast cuts which will create the tension required in the sequence.
I showed the sequence to my farther and asked him what he thought the sequence was about and if you could tell that the antagonist was a ritualist and an antagonist and that the girl was being held captive by the girl. He did also notice a few continuity errors but after all he is a media teacher.
Some tension is created. However, I would like it if more was created but we can easily achieve this on shoot day when we have the satanic creature sorted and a soundtrack which will create tension and emotion as sound is the most important element of film.
The camera angles that we have used are effective in showing which character has a higher power status and who is in charge. We did this by using a high angle on the girl in captive to make her look weak and scared and a low angle on the ritualist to show that he is in charge and that the girl should be scared of him.
We tried to use a series of complex dutch angles and other shot types to convey the girl's emotions and confusion that she is going through. We used little camera movement in the test but I'm hoping to incorporate some on the shoot day so that the sequence becomes more dynamic. In general, the shot composition was very good. there was no shot which we had messed up the grid or the rule of thirds.
From this test shoot I can take away that our group can make something fairly decent without all the shots required to make a full sequence. We will work on creating the monster in the next few weeks. Realistically, we need a dark hood that we can put LED lights into and add some fur and feather to the hoodie as we plan to only film the silhouette.
I feel like a few of the shot transitions haven't worked perfectly but are easily solved with a few more editing workshops. The Antagonist and its character have worked really well along with the girl held in captive. The idea I original and I like the way its been put on the screen.
Overall I enjoyed making it and even though its not perfect and precise, these tweaks can be made in the future and on the shoot day.











